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Really promising start, I’m excited to read more! The art is wonderful (especially the animated cut scene and the stunning CG on Dreamscape bus), and Gin is so adorable <3

spoilers ahead

okay its review time!  so far, the plot is like a furry version of Madoka magicka, I like it. when it comes to bugs, I've only noticed one and it's just really funny rather than annoying. but I don't understand why Dalton has what i assume is his dream clothes on in the second cg even tho gin said he didn't have them yet but other than that the music is great the art is great and while not enough of the story has been published for me to have a definitive opinion it seems pretty good so far.

final rating for current demo: 8.5/10

The music is so good! Really adds a lot to the experience, making it feel more cinematic, mad props!

Typo on the artist's name, its Chie.

I've been following development for quite a bit, its nice to see it finally come out!

One of the things I've gotta say is that it has a really nice premise and character design! Kudos to the character designer and writers. 

But as I read through it I've felt like the pacing is just too fast when introducing the whole dream world thing. 

I know this project is still in progress but I think the diamond that Gin & MC have should be shown visually (like in a Cg or portrait) 

One more smaller thing is that Gin in his real world outfit feels a bit blurry.

But overall I am excited to see the next update for this novel!